Tuesday, January 31, 2012

enough, says my critic


what
     do you think you’re doing?
poetry’s never written in such haste
so get a grip of yourself
and quit barfing all over the place


4 comments:

Divya said...

Phew! A fitting final entry for the month. Tell me someone actually told you something like this!

batalaland said...

:) haha! apart frm you?

batalaland said...

.. and i thought you liked the poetry!

Simrat said...

this after your 'poem a day' commitment? c'mon for some it days days, months, years, and then for some, it just pours out---you can't set a time restriction!