Sunday, March 20, 2011

chutney in bangalore



I often promise my feet
when trudging crowded streets,
dat ‘ll soon take ‘em places
far prettier than these.
But it’s nothing against seein u
rush for the bus,
ploddin ur way
thru the crowd thus,
dodging cars, crossin roads
jostlin thru the millin hordes.
U, who ought to be
in slippers, walkin a stream,
or in leech-proofs, a forest trail,
listenin for birds, smiling at snakes,
carelessly twirlin on the dewey grass,
as the open meadow u pass.
n though I’d miss u once u’re gone,
heart-rendingly incongruous:
it’s not where u belong.

6 comments:

Divya said...

Beautiful! "smiling at snakes" :P hehhe.. nice :)

Chimpansy said...

Deeeeeep LIKE!! :)


and my word verification is 'shoolla' which for some reason I feel is very fitting for what I just read!

batalaland said...

thanx !!

3B's said...

I'm touched :D

sonali said...

This is a great poem! I love how it ends. Only, I wish you spelled out 'and' and 'ing', 'you are' and so forth. Why don't you...

batalaland said...

well, maybe 'm lazy. :)